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1、七年級(上)七年級(上)Units 1-4(含(含Starter)家庭家庭第二部分第二部分高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)從全國近從全國近5年年“家庭類家庭類”相關(guān)話題書面表達的相關(guān)話題書面表達的命題來看,通常會從介紹家庭成員及家庭成員之命題來看,通常會從介紹家庭成員及家庭成員之間發(fā)生的故事(家庭成員的描述與介紹,家庭成間發(fā)生的故事(家庭成員的描述與介紹,家庭成員的年齡、職業(yè)、長相、愛好等,講述自己與家員的年齡、職業(yè)、長相、愛好等,講述自己與家人之間發(fā)生的故事)、家庭成員之間的溝通與交人之間發(fā)生的故事)、家庭成員之間的溝通與交流及家庭成員之間的深厚感情三方面來設(shè)題。流及家庭成員之間的深厚感情三
2、方面來設(shè)題。分析近分析近3年年60套四川真題可知,四川對此話題套四川真題可知,四川對此話題的書面表達是以介紹家庭成員及家庭成員之間發(fā)的書面表達是以介紹家庭成員及家庭成員之間發(fā)生的故事為主,下面以(生的故事為主,下面以(2014綿陽)真題為例:綿陽)真題為例:寫作導(dǎo)圖寫作導(dǎo)圖To dadMistakes To correctLessonstell him the truthhelp father clean his carnot make the same mistakewithout his permission the computer gets virus亮點句型速亮點句型速成成常用句型:
3、常用句型:Thanks for what she has done for me. Im moved.推薦句型:推薦句型:I am deeply moved and thankful by the things she has done for me.常用句型:常用句型:You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents.If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.推薦句型:推薦句型:開頭句:開頭句:1. One is
4、 that you shouldnt play computer games on your fathers computer without his permission.2. How can I get on well with my brother?正文句:正文句:1. Since you have made mistakes, you must come up with ways to correct them.2. My father is a handsome man with big eyes.3. Her favorite color is green, so she ofte
5、n wears green skirt.4. My mother gets up the earliest in our family.5. My father is one of my best friends, and I often talk with him if I have some problems.6. I often have a communication with my parents.7. They often encourage me when Im in trouble.8. I argued with my brother when he broke my gla
6、ss.9. Mr Smith is a loving grandfather who often tells stories to me.結(jié)尾句:結(jié)尾句:1. At last, tell him you will not make the same mistake next time.2. Thank you for everything you have done for me. 3. I have a big family. I like my father, mother, grandfather, grandmother and they like me, too.(常用詞匯見本書(常
7、用詞匯見本書28天話題詞匯分類速記表天話題詞匯分類速記表話話題(一)個人情況(二)家庭朋友與周圍的人)題(一)個人情況(二)家庭朋友與周圍的人)寫作模板寫作模板There are 幾個家庭成員幾個家庭成員 in my family. They are 家庭成員家庭成員 and me. My father is 外貌特征外貌特征. My father works 職業(yè)和工作地點職業(yè)和工作地點, and my mother is 職業(yè)和工職業(yè)和工作地點作地點 They are 性格特點性格特點 and they 相處如何相處如何. My parents 怎樣要求孩子怎樣要求孩子. When I a
8、m at home, I 和和父母一起做的活動父母一起做的活動. In short, I live in 家庭總體評價家庭總體評價 family.典例剖析典例剖析 你的英國朋友你的英國朋友Steve未經(jīng)允許在他爸爸的電腦未經(jīng)允許在他爸爸的電腦上玩游戲?qū)е码娔X中毒,上玩游戲?qū)е码娔X中毒,Steve心里害怕,不敢向心里害怕,不敢向爸爸說,因此寫信向你求助。請你以爸爸說,因此寫信向你求助。請你以Diana的名義的名義根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示給根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示給Steve寫一封回信。寫一封回信。提示:提示:1. 指出指出Steve的兩點錯誤;的兩點錯誤; 2. 最好立即向爸爸說出實情;最好立即向爸爸說出實情; 3.
9、建議建議Steve幫爸爸做些事,以彌補過錯。幫爸爸做些事,以彌補過錯。要求:要求:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)80詞左右詞左右; 2. 短文中不得提及真實的人名和校名等信息短文中不得提及真實的人名和校名等信息; 3. 開頭與結(jié)尾已給出開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Steve, Thanks for thinking of me at this time. I think you have made two mistakes._ Oh, and next time, play basketball with your Dad! Best wishes.Diana細讀所給的文字提示,提
10、取信息:細讀所給的文字提示,提取信息:1. 本文要求以戴安娜的名義給史蒂夫?qū)懸环怅P(guān)本文要求以戴安娜的名義給史蒂夫?qū)懸环怅P(guān)于請求爸爸原諒的書信,寫作時用第一人于請求爸爸原諒的書信,寫作時用第一人稱,時稱,時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。2. 根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知首先要指出史蒂夫的兩點根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知首先要指出史蒂夫的兩點錯誤,其次要向他爸爸說出實情,最后建議錯誤,其次要向他爸爸說出實情,最后建議 他幫爸他幫爸爸做些事情,以彌補過錯。爸做些事情,以彌補過錯。【審題指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】【高分范文高分范文】 Dear Steve, Thanks for thinking of me at this time.
11、 I think you have made two mistakes. One is that you shouldnt play computer games on your fathers computer without his permission. The other is that you made the computer get virus. Since you have made mistakes, you must come up with ways to correct them. First of all, you had better tell him the tr
12、uth immediately. Maybe he will be angry with you. But you can do something to make him happy. For example, you can volunteer to do some housework or help your father clean his car. At last, tell him you will not make the same mistake next time. Oh, and next time, play basketball with your Dad! Best wishes.Diana1.一個是一個是另一個是另一個是_2.未經(jīng)他的允許未經(jīng)他的允許_3.想出想出_4.例如例如_5.最后,告訴他你下次不會再犯同樣的錯誤。最后,告訴他你下次不會再犯同樣的錯誤。_one is thatthe other is that without his permission come up with for example At last, tell him you will not make the same mistake next time. 【檢測菜單檢測菜單】