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江蘇高考書面表達(dá)近五年考情分布,從上表可以看出，近五年來(lái)，江蘇高考書面表達(dá)的題目設(shè)置場(chǎng)景越來(lái)越具有真實(shí)性，越來(lái)越與生活實(shí)際緊密聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容包括日常生活、學(xué)校生活、社會(huì)文化等方面。從2014年開始，江蘇高考書面表達(dá)采用了一種新題型“讀寫任務(wù)型作文”，題型有創(chuàng)新，但對(duì)寫作能力的要求和詞數(shù)的要求等沒(méi)有變化。材料既有讀寫式的文字介紹也有圖表，信息量大，這對(duì)考生的材料分析、概括提煉能力要求很高，同時(shí)，具有一定的開放性，便于考生寫出緊扣主題的個(gè)性化內(nèi)容，又能防止考生出現(xiàn)簡(jiǎn)單翻譯寫作要求中的句子的做法。,請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。,【寫作內(nèi)容】,1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名，然后用2—3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。,【寫作要求】【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】,1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,【寫作思路】,本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生根據(jù)兩段文字材料寫一篇文章，針對(duì)“消費(fèi)排名”現(xiàn)象論述自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)，并闡述理由。文章為任務(wù)型讀寫，屬于議論文，主要使用第一和第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意緊扣兩段材料表達(dá)的主題，不可偏題，還應(yīng)注意合理使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜句型。,考生首先應(yīng)當(dāng)仔細(xì)閱讀題干所提供的文字材料。通讀兩篇文字材料可知，第一段材料為一對(duì)母子看了網(wǎng)上的評(píng)論后買回旅行箱，結(jié)果買回來(lái)的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好；第二段材料為一家人看了網(wǎng)評(píng)后去餐館吃飯，結(jié)果飯菜很不好吃，從而凸顯出網(wǎng)評(píng)的不可靠性。明確以上事實(shí)后，再在此基礎(chǔ)上明確文章的主題和結(jié)構(gòu)，對(duì)“消費(fèi)排名”現(xiàn)象作相關(guān)闡述。本文可分為三段進(jìn)行寫作，第一段用30詞左右概述材料的主要內(nèi)容，提出文章主題；第二段論述對(duì)“消費(fèi)排名”現(xiàn)象的觀點(diǎn)并說(shuō)明理由；第三段總結(jié)全文，再次點(diǎn)明主題。在遣詞造句上，應(yīng)當(dāng)注意合理使用連接成分，以提高文章的邏輯性，如在說(shuō)明看法時(shí)可以用tobeginwith，what’smore，lastbutnotleast等；此外應(yīng)盡量使用較復(fù)雜句型，如在總結(jié)全文大意時(shí)可以用定語(yǔ)從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)；在其他地方可以用主語(yǔ)從句、倒裝語(yǔ)序等。,【參考范文1】,Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.,Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependpletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.,【參考范文2】,Nowadays,mostmoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings,easytoaccess,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomers’purchasedecision.However,resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.,Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers，buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow,mostoftheratingsarebasedonothers’judgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently，blindlyfollowingothers’advicewillaffectourownjudgment.Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheouteofacarefulmanipulationofpaniesorsellers.Ithasbeeamonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.,請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國(guó)電影票房收入(box-officeine)的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。,SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang：Hi，SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua：Whatever.We’vegotsomanychoices，KungFuYoga，JourneytotheWest...Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua：Andthehigh-tech！...LiJiang：Perfect！Let’sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.,OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother？Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’sconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice...Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring...,【寫作內(nèi)容】【寫作要求】【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】,1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.我國(guó)電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕目捶?上述對(duì)話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn))；3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)我國(guó)電影票房收入走向的看法，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,【參考范文】,Thebox-officeineofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However，thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeine.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However，Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.Andtheinternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently，someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.,China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedintheingyears，soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore，itsbox-officeinewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.,請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。Inrecentyears，InternetvotinghasbeeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves，butalsourgeotherstovoteforpetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang，ahighschoolstudent，isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”petition，organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers’dailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbeingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.,SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”petition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthepetition，thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch，buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote，ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.,【寫作內(nèi)容】,1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；2.用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2～3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。,【寫作要求】,1.寫作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。,【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】,內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,【參考范文1】,On-linevotingbeesincreasinglypopular，andmanypetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople，whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion，on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbeweled，sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents，inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition，theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient，regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore，votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.,Tobehonest，voterssometimesfeelannoyed，notbecausetheyhatevoting，butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore，Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.,【參考范文2】,Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzledatthenegativesideofthevoting，althoughsomearequitehappywithit，andactiveindoingit.Inmyopinion，Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly，peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto.Secondly，votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthepetitors，butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly，thevotersoreventhepetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersformercialpurposes.,Inshort，Internetvoting，tosomeextent，isunfair，ifnotimmoral，andcannotbetrusted.Therefore，rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved.Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed，butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest.,