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2019-2020年高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 書(shū)面表達(dá)學(xué)生觀摩選編（2） 書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 最近，你校參加了某英文報(bào)紙正在開(kāi)展的題為“中學(xué)生課堂注意力”的專欄討論，并 請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校給該英文報(bào)紙投稿。下面的表格為你校的調(diào)查結(jié)果（表中數(shù)據(jù)為學(xué)生人 數(shù)百分比）。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息做簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明，并根據(jù)提示給出改善的建議。(字?jǐn)?shù) 140). 中學(xué)生課堂注意力集中情況 及注意力不能集中的原因： 改善注意力的建議： 能夠集中注意力 40％ 不能夠集中注意力 60％ 課堂干擾 30％ 睡眠不足與疲勞 70％ 教室 通風(fēng)、明亮 課堂 積極參與課堂活動(dòng) 課間 適量活動(dòng)或適當(dāng)休息 ________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】 Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson. 30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes. Therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh. As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others. During the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom. 書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 假定你是李華， 暑假你參加了英國(guó)游學(xué)活動(dòng)，住在房東Tricia家中， 回國(guó)后給房東寫(xiě)一封信表示感謝， 要點(diǎn)如下： 1、安全抵家 2、回顧英國(guó)游學(xué)體會(huì) 3、感謝房東的幫助 4、附寄兩張合影 5、表達(dá)愿望 注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右。 2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3、結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。 Dear Tricia, Looking forward to your reply. Yours LiHua 【參考范文】 Dear Tricia, I’ve e back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local stduents. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culturedn adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you . By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together. You are expected to e to China soon. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 記敘文型基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作1---1 專題導(dǎo)讀 記敘文是以敘述為主要表達(dá)方式，以寫(xiě)人物的經(jīng)歷和事物發(fā)展變化為主要內(nèi)容的一種文體，包括記人記事方面的故事、日記、游記、新聞、通訊等。記敘文通常要將時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果六個(gè)要素交代清楚。通常使用第一人稱或第三人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，第一人稱主要是用于寫(xiě)自傳或本人的經(jīng)歷，第三人稱是用于寫(xiě)他人的經(jīng)歷或事跡。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 　　1．注意不要漏掉信息點(diǎn)，但也不要為了生動(dòng)而隨意添加信息。 2．信息點(diǎn)的表述不一定完全按照題目所給的順序，可能要適當(dāng)重組。要特別注意故事發(fā)展的線索和時(shí)間順序等。 　　3．記敘文寫(xiě)作的時(shí)態(tài)多數(shù)是用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，但也要注意靈活運(yùn)用其他時(shí)態(tài)。 　　4．高考中記敘文的話題通常是與中學(xué)生的生活閱歷有關(guān)，如校園生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平時(shí)要注意積累這些方面的詞匯和短語(yǔ)。 典例導(dǎo)練 【xx湖北卷改編】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你校園生活中的一個(gè)事例，就“與人合作”這一話題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。 Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people. 【寫(xiě)作要求】 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 One possible version： Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn’t realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school.At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities.As a result, I was tired out and depressed so I turned to my teacher, who advised me to cooperate with others. It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. 新題預(yù)測(cè) 【寫(xiě)作要求】 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 One possible version： Yesterday my classmates and I went to West Mountain and had a picnic. All of us set off at seven o’clock from our school gate and rode to the foot of the mountain. After an hour’s climbing, we reached the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Running, singing, dancing, playing chess and taking photos, we had a wonderful time there. After the picnic lunch at three o’clock, we felt very tired, so we went down the mountain and came home. 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下說(shuō)明，使用5個(gè)規(guī)范的英語(yǔ)句子描述所給的全部?jī)?nèi)容。 【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】 假如你叫孫軍，是某市一所中學(xué)的學(xué)生。老師要求同學(xué)們寫(xiě)一篇英文短文，反映學(xué)校門(mén)前交通擁擠的現(xiàn)象，短文須包括以下要點(diǎn)： 【寫(xiě)作要求】 必須使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 One possible version： Beside my school there is a primary school and the gates of the two schools both face the main road.In rush hours, there are so many cars, buses and bikes on the main road that the students have to cross it to school.Crowds of people often thread their way through the moving cars and buses.What’s worse, some pupils are too young to go to school by themselves, so many parents have to go along with them to make sure that their children are safe.I think the government should build an overpass over the road so that we can pass through it safely; otherwise accidents are sure to happen from time to time.