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寫作園地 友誼話題寫作 [感悟范文] 良好的人際關(guān)系是建設(shè)和諧社會的關(guān)鍵。某報社就“中學(xué)生交友？”的話題征稿。假如你是王力，你們班對此話題展開了討論，請你根據(jù)討論的情況以及你對如何交友的看法撰寫一篇稿件，以書信的形式發(fā)給該報社編輯。 注意：詞數(shù)：120左右。書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear editor， Recently our class have had a heated discussion on making friends between middle school students._________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Wang Li [范文] Dear editor， Recently our class have had a heated discussion on making friends between middle school students. ①A good personal relationship, as we all know, plays an important role in building the harmonious society. ②Many students suggest that we should make friends with the person who are of great benefit to our studies, so we will help each other, learn from each other and make greater progress in our studies. ③Some argue that we should have friends related to our life. ④Whenever we have difficulty in dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid us of the problems.⑤In addition, others hold the view that we are supposed to have some friends who can listen to us attentively and share our bitterness and joy, which can help us get out of trouble. ⑥What I want to stress is that each of us ought to have a true friend. ⑦When disagreement does occur, its sensible to talk it over with each other.⑧Friendship is to be strengthened by truth and devotion. Yours， Wang Li [技法討論] 本模塊要求寫一篇與“友誼”相關(guān)的作文，其目的主要是發(fā)表一下對友誼的看法。 發(fā)表對“友誼”的看法屬于對某一話題發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)的作文，該類作文是高考作文常見命題方式。如：2007年廣東的以“誰是你的偶像”為題作文、2009年江西的以“Turning a bad mood into a good one”為題的作文、2010年江蘇的介紹自己學(xué)英語的情況并對學(xué)校英語教學(xué)提建議等。 此類作文的寫作步驟如下： 1．仔細(xì)審題，確定文章結(jié)構(gòu) 本類作文一般可分為三部分，第一部分引出話題，第二部分陳述友誼的重要性，最后一部分提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。 2．根據(jù)需要確定時態(tài) 本類作文的主題為人際關(guān)系、友情，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生積極的友誼觀及相關(guān)的語言技能，因此應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。 黃金表達(dá) A friend that you buy with presents will be bought from you. Without confidence there is no friendship. Good company on the road is the shortest cut. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Without a friend, the world is a wilderness. Friendship is like wine－the older the better. True friendship lasts forever. All are not friends that speak us fair. Friendship is to be strengthened by truth and devotion. A little help is worth a deal of pity. Be slow in choosing a friend, slower in changing. A real friend never gets in your way, unless you happen to be on the way down. We shall never have friends if we expect to find them without fault. 亮點(diǎn)分析： 亮點(diǎn)一：①句中運(yùn)用as we all know引出建立良好的人際關(guān)系的重要性。 亮點(diǎn)二：②句中使用suggest引出一些人提出的交友建議，suggest后的賓語從句以及who引導(dǎo)的定語從句提升了表達(dá)的檔次。 亮點(diǎn)三：③句中argue的使用引出了另一部分人交友的觀點(diǎn)。 亮點(diǎn)四：④句中have difficulty in doing sth.結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用使得句子的結(jié)構(gòu)更加高級。 亮點(diǎn)五：⑤句中hold the view that的使用引出了其他人的交友觀點(diǎn)。 亮點(diǎn)六：⑥句中stress的使用引出了作者自己的交友觀點(diǎn)。 亮點(diǎn)七：⑦句中作者使用its sensible to...結(jié)構(gòu)針對產(chǎn)生分歧時給出了相應(yīng)的建議。 [類文演練] 某英文報在開展關(guān)于友誼的討論。討論中有這樣一個問題：“你正在復(fù)習(xí)功課，你的一個朋友請你陪他上街購物。你去還是不去？”假設(shè)你是李華，在昨天下午的班會課上，你們班就這個問題進(jìn)行了討論。你的同學(xué)李雷和湯姆的觀點(diǎn)截然不同。請你根據(jù)下表所列的觀點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇短文，給該英文報投稿。 李雷的觀點(diǎn) 是朋友就不能拒絕其要求；為朋友即使學(xué)習(xí)有所影響，也沒有關(guān)系。 湯姆的觀點(diǎn) 朋友的請求也不能都答應(yīng)；學(xué)習(xí)比購物更重要。 你的觀點(diǎn) …… 注意：1.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3．詞數(shù)：120左右。 Dear Editor， ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [聯(lián)想詞匯] 1. have a ________ on 　關(guān)于……的討論 答案：discussion 2. ________ ones request 應(yīng)某人要求 答案：at 3. ________ ones requests 滿足某人要求 答案：meet 4. ________ some extent 在某種程度上 答案：to 5. that ________ 視情況而定 答案：depends [連詞成句] 1. ________________ with your friend ________ while you are going over your lesson? 你復(fù)習(xí)功課時朋友要求與你去購物，你會去嗎？ 答案：Would you go shopping; at his request 2. ________________， either Li Lei or Tom is right________________. 依我看，在某種程度上李雷和湯姆的觀點(diǎn)都對。 答案：In my opinion; to some extent [連句成章] ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： Dear_Editor， Yesterday afternoon, we had a discussion on the question：“Would you go shopping with your friend at his request while you are going over your lessons？” My classmates Li Lei and Tom had different viewpoints. Li Lei thought that he couldnt refuse his friends requests even though his studies would be affected. But Tom didnt think so. He said he wouldnt meet all requests from his friends, and studying was more important than shopping. In my opinion, either Li Lei or Tom is right to some extent. We may meet our friends requests, but that depends. If we have difficulties, we should let them know. Yours， Li_Hua