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1、2022-2023學(xué)年高中英語 Unit 11 The Media Section Ⅶ Writing——給報社寫信學(xué)案 北師大版必修4
[文體指導(dǎo)]
本單元的寫作要求是就某一社會問題寫信給媒體陳述自己的觀點,它應(yīng)符合一般書信的格式。英文書信的構(gòu)成可分為五個部分:
1.問候:通常以Dear開頭;
2.介紹寫信的意圖:通常是開門見山地說清寫信的目的,不需要過多的客套話;
3.正文:說清楚要表達的意見或事實,注意要條理清晰,言簡意賅;
4.結(jié)束語:是正式的結(jié)束語,通常表達對收到對方回信的期盼;
5.落款:正式信件的落款要用較客氣的詞匯,下方的姓名要寫全稱,字跡要清楚。
[亮點句式]
2、
1.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.
我非常喜歡它主要是因為下面的兩個原因。
2.As a student, I suggest that...
作為一名學(xué)生,我建議……
3.I would like to suggest that...
我想建議……
4.I am writing to express my views concerning...
我寫信來是要表達有關(guān)我對……的看法。
5.You have asked for my advice with regard to ...and I
3、 will try to make some suggestions.
你問我有關(guān)……的事情,我會嘗試著提出一些建議。
6.It seems to me that you could ...
我認為你可以……
7.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
我想如果你能……,可能會更好。
8.I believe you will take my advice into account.
我相信你會認真考慮我的建議的。
9.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/
4、remendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望這些建議/意見/看法對你來說實用/有用/有幫助。
[滿分佳作構(gòu)建]
[寫作任務(wù)]
假設(shè)你是Sam,上周買了一本英漢詞典,發(fā)現(xiàn)有質(zhì)量以及服務(wù)問題,要求更換,但遇到麻煩,因此你想用英文給《二十一世紀英文報》報社編輯寫信反映情況。詞數(shù)100個左右。信中要點:
1.書頁缺少,印刷錯誤影響閱讀理解。
2.要求更換,但書店工作人員態(tài)度差,拒絕更換,否認質(zhì)量問題。
3.希望報社呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量。
[審題謀篇]
體裁
書信
話題
提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量
時態(tài)
一般過去時
一般現(xiàn)在時
人稱
第一人
5、稱為主
結(jié)構(gòu)
第一部分:向報社反映你去書店買字典的遭遇,表明你的意圖。
第二部分:介紹你在書店購物的經(jīng)過和發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題。
第三部分:表達你的觀點和看法,并提出合理的建議。
[遣詞造句]
Ⅰ.對接單元詞匯
1.editor 編輯
2.demand 要求,請求
3.harmful 有害的
4.a(chǎn)ttitude 態(tài)度
5.take...into consideration 把……考慮在內(nèi)
6.faithfully 真誠地
Ⅱ.巧用單元句式、語法
(一)翻譯句子
1.到家后仔細讀這本書,我發(fā)現(xiàn)缺少了好幾頁。
I reached home and
6、read it carefully.I found several pages were missing.
2.無論店員怎么說,但字典的質(zhì)量差而且服務(wù)不好是很明顯的。這對我產(chǎn)生了影響,而且也將對其他消費者產(chǎn)生危害。(no matter what引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)
No matter what the staff says,it is clear that the dictionary is of low quality and the service is worse.It has had an effect on me and will be harmful to the other c
7、onsumers.
3.但是一些服務(wù)不能達到標準,而且店員的態(tài)度需要改變。(need doing)
Some services fail to achieve the standard.The attitude of the staff needs changing.
4.眾所周知,今天的市場要求更好的服務(wù)。(as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)
As we all know,today's market demands better service.
5.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)盡一切可能來維護消費者的權(quán)力和利益。(用定語從句及as well as)
We should do everything we
8、can to protect the consumers' rights as well as interests.
(二)句式升級
6.用不定式作結(jié)果狀語改寫句1
I reached home and read it carefully,only to find several pages were missing.
7.用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句合并句2
No matter what the staff says,it is clear that the dictionary is of low quality and the service is worse,which
9、 has had an effect on me and will be harmful to the other consumers.
8.用and將3合為并列句
Some services fail to achieve the standard and the attitude of the staff needs changing.
[妙筆成篇]
10、
【參考范文】
Dear editor,
I am writing to plain ab
11、out a bookstore and its service.Last week I bought an English-Chinese dictionary in a bookstore near my home.I reached home and read it carefully,only to find several pages were missing.So I went to the bookstore to require for a replacement.However,the staff of the bookstore turned down my request
12、rudely.
No matter what the staff says,it is clear that the dictionary is of low quality and the service is worse,which has had an effect on me and will be harmful to other consumers.As we all know,today's market demands better service.But some services fail to achieve the standard and the attitude of the staff needs changing.
We should do everything we can to protect the consumers' rights as well as interests.
I believe you will take my advice into consideration.I look forward to reading more articles about improvement of service in your newspaper.
Yours faithfully,
Sam