2018年中考英語(yǔ)試題分項(xiàng)版解析匯編（第03期）專題13 書面表達(dá)（含解析）

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1、 專題13 書面表達(dá) 1.【2018年四川省宜賓】初中三年即將過(guò)去，你在這三年中一定有沒(méi)有實(shí)現(xiàn)的愿望。為此，校園廣播站特向全校 初三學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇廣播稿。 1. 沒(méi)有實(shí)現(xiàn)的愿望(如:學(xué)會(huì)吉他)； 2. 沒(méi)有實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望的原因（至少兩個(gè)）； 3. 進(jìn)入高中后為實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望的計(jì)劃。 要求： 1．短文應(yīng)條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明，90 詞左右。（開頭己給出，不計(jì)入 總字?jǐn)?shù)） 2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校、地名等信息。 3．短文應(yīng)包括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 How time flies! Three years of junior high school

2、has gone by before we know it. 【答案】How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it. Each time I look back on my school days, I feel regretful, because one of my wishes hasn’t been realized. That is to learn how to play the guitar. Although I am really interested in

3、 playing the instrument, I was busy working at my lessons. Besides, there was much homework to every day. The end of junior high school is the beginning of new life. If I can enter the senior high school, I will take part in after-school activities to learn to play the guitar. I believe I’ll live a

4、 colorful life in the senior high school. 2.【2018年浙江省金華】在即將舉行的中學(xué)生國(guó)際文化交流活動(dòng)中，你將代表學(xué)校介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，請(qǐng)你從所給的卡片中任選一張，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹該節(jié)日。 注意：①發(fā)言稿中必須包含卡片上的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；②文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；③詞數(shù)80～100；④文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one

5、 of the Chinese traditional festivals the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival falls in January February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping

6、 they will have a bright new start. During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year, Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting? That’s all. Thanks for listening 【高分句型一】 Many people stay up late to

7、 welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. 許多人熬夜迎接新年，希望他們有一個(gè)光明的開端。 動(dòng)詞不定式to welcome the new year用作目的狀語(yǔ)，分詞短語(yǔ)hoping they will have a bright new start.用作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。 【高分句型二】 Children can often get hongbao from their elders. 孩子們通?？梢詮拈L(zhǎng)輩那里得到紅包。此句寫出了春節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗，也是孩子們最開心的事情之一。get sth. from從……得到

8、某物。 3.【2018年浙江省紹興中考】你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在開展主題為“ How do students find study partners？”的討論，為此你采訪了一些學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文進(jìn)行交流，并說(shuō)明你自己的方式及理由。 注意:（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)； （2）你的理由至少兩條； （3）詞數(shù):80-100； （4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯:學(xué)伴 study partner方便的convenient 短文首句: I have recently done a survey about how students fi

9、nd study partners. 【答案】I have recently＇done a survey about how students find study partners. Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides， they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students

10、 Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What＇s more， they think working out problems together helps learn more easily. As for me， I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also， it

11、＇s a good way to learn how to get on well with others. 題目中已經(jīng)給出；接下來(lái)我們來(lái)介紹兩種不同的方式以及理由；最后闡述自己的方式及理由。所以短文可以分成三段來(lái)敘述。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)為主。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、句型和短語(yǔ)，寫完整的句子。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以主謂賓和主系表為主，輔以并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫。 點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息。

12、短文共分成三部分，第一部分是題目中給出的一句概括的句子，點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。第二部分中作者介紹了不同學(xué)生們尋找學(xué)伴的不同方式以及他們的理由；最后作者介紹了自己的方式及理由。分段敘述，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，有條理。其次短文使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)挠⒄Z(yǔ)表達(dá)方式，句式符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)言地道、得體。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，第二段使用了第三人稱敘述，最后一段使用第一人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。最后短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They believe it＇s convenient to find partners to study with online中使用了賓語(yǔ)從句，和非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作主語(yǔ)的句型；再如Some stu

13、dents Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face中使用了目的狀語(yǔ)從句；再如I＇d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun.中原因狀語(yǔ)從句等等。同時(shí)文章中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Besides, What’s more, As for me, Also等等，使文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。 4.

14、【2018年甘肅省白銀】書面表達(dá) “讀萬(wàn)卷書，行萬(wàn)里路”，旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。請(qǐng)以“Travelling”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫一篇短文，發(fā)表你的看法。 注意：1．要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2．從思維導(dǎo)圖Saying部分選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母裱院侠砝迷诙涛闹校? 3．句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫，書寫規(guī)范； 4．詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右； 5．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及其它任何個(gè)人相關(guān)信息。 【答案】Travelling Travelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or he

15、ard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of the places you visit. While travelling, you can meet more pe

16、ople and make more friends. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. 5.【2018年河北省中考】請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。 提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing? （2）What should you do when you

17、see people litter like this? Why? 要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 （2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。 （3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 參考詞匯：throw, environment, civilized(文明的 I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________ _________________________________________________________________________

18、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

19、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I can see a man and a woma

20、n in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protect

21、ed by everybody.We should be civilized citizens. 點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。 6.【2018年湖北省黃岡市中考】美麗中國(guó),美麗長(zhǎng)江。黃岡是長(zhǎng)江邊一座美麗的城市。假如你是黃岡某中學(xué)的一名中學(xué)生李明,請(qǐng)你以“美麗的黃岡”為話題,向你的英國(guó)筆友Tom介紹一下你美麗的家鄉(xiāng)——黃岡。 要點(diǎn)提示：1.黃岡位于長(zhǎng)江之邊,大別山

22、之南； 2.黃岡歷史悠久,名人輩出； 3.黃岡風(fēng)景迷人,鄉(xiāng)村秀美; 4.人人參與,從小事做起,黃岡人正在努力地保護(hù)黃岡的自然環(huán)境; 5.邀請(qǐng)Tom來(lái)中國(guó),欣賞黃岡更美好的綠水青山、藍(lán)天白云。 寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右(短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)); 2.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; 3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。 參考詞匯:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains Dear Tom, Thanks for your last letter. You a

23、sked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wish

24、es! Yours, Li Ming 【答案】Dear Tom, Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you. My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains. It's a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from

25、 our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown. Now the peopl

26、e in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our

27、city more and more beautiful. We are taking action! Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit! Best wishes! Yo

28、urs, Li Ming 點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了黃岡的地理位置，接下來(lái)介紹黃岡的歷史、風(fēng)景和環(huán)保情況，最后邀請(qǐng)Tom來(lái)中國(guó),欣賞黃岡更美好的綠水青山、藍(lán)天白云。此處ask sb about sth, a number of, be proud of, as…as possible, play a role in doing sth, fall in love with, have a wonderful time等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。 7.【2018年湖北省宜昌中考】為了更好地開展八年級(jí)學(xué)生的研學(xué)旅行( study travel)，學(xué)校現(xiàn)面向全年級(jí)征集活

29、動(dòng)意向。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀憬ㄗh的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)并陳述理由，簡(jiǎn)要介紹打算開展的活動(dòng)。 要求： （1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名； （2）詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear leaders, I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________

30、_____________________________________________________ We can discuss the details(細(xì)節(jié))later. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear leaders, I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel. I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and mou

31、ntains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler. We will have lots of activities, such as

32、 climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational We can discuss the details(細(xì)節(jié)) later. Yours Li Hua 點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。 8.【2

33、018年湖南省郴州市中考】假如你是李華，上周六上午，你們班全體同學(xué)在特殊教育學(xué)校做了一次志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)給你的筆友 Sandy寫一封信。 What You See What You Do What You Feel 1.School: clean, tidy 2. Students: ◆blind, deaf ◆speak/read/write, difficult follow teacher, carefully 1.paly games learn paper cutting 2. give books, snacks, toys …… 要

34、求： 1.文中須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻譯)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右(短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))； 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Sandy, Last Saturday morning, our class went to the Special Education School to have a volunteer activity. ______________________________________________________________________ ________________________

35、______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything special to tell me? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the speci

36、al school. My classmates and I took a lot of presents to them,such as books,snacks and toys. The school is clean and tidy.Some students are blind.Others are deaf.Some students can’t speak or read or write.It is difficult for them to do everyday things.But they followed the teacher to do things caref

37、ully.After arriving there,some of us began playing games with them. Some of us taught them to learn paper cutting .We also performed wonderful programs，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In m

38、y opinion, we should spend more time helping them. Helping others is Chinese people’s virtue. 9.【2018年湖南省衡陽(yáng)市中考】假如你是劉偉，你在英國(guó)的筆友Jim對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日很感興趣，他來(lái)信詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給他回一封電子郵件，簡(jiǎn)單介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。今天是端午節(jié)，請(qǐng)你重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)人一般是如何過(guò)端午節(jié)的。 注意：1. 80~100詞左右。 2.可以結(jié)合自己的情況適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫。 3.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to recei

39、ve your e-mail.

40、 . What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Liu Wei 【答案】Dear Jim, I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth

41、 month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it. The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular. The rice dumpling is made of rice,

42、meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river. Overall,the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting! What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festiva

43、l?Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Liu Wei 點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。 10.【2018年甘肅蘭州】假設(shè)你是李華，今天正逢端午節(jié)，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣，寫信向你詢問(wèn)端午節(jié)的有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，給他寫一封回信。 1.中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一，已有2000多年的歷史（the Dra

44、gon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history）； 2.為了紀(jì)念著名詩(shī)人屈原（honor the great poet Qu Yuan）； 3.中國(guó)南方有賽龍舟的習(xí)俗（Dragon Boat races）； 4.家人團(tuán)聚聽(tīng)懂粽子和其他美食（eat Zongzi and other delicious food）； 5.有三天假期，可以外出旅游（a 3 day holiday）。 要求：1.80詞左右，書信格式； 2.內(nèi)容合理，要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)

45、正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。 注意：不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校，姓名等個(gè)人信息（除所給身份外）。 【答案】Dear Jack, How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. it is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day,

46、 people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food. In southern parts of China, people often have the Dagon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax

47、ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【點(diǎn)睛】寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1.認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想。2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)。3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。4. 最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。 11.【2018年湖北省咸寧】.“中國(guó)核潛艇之父”黃旭華院士，是央視王牌節(jié)目“開講啦”開播以來(lái)最年長(zhǎng)

48、的演 講者。上周五下午，全校師生觀看完該視頻后，都眼含熱淚。 為了學(xué)習(xí)英雄的先進(jìn)事跡，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以 “Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes”為題，寫一篇人物介紹。 寫作要點(diǎn)： 1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但為了祖國(guó)強(qiáng)盛，放棄成為一名醫(yī)生的機(jī)會(huì)，學(xué)習(xí)建造核潛艇； 2. 在當(dāng)時(shí)條件艱苦的環(huán)境下，他專心于核潛艇的研究和建造； 3. 為了保護(hù)國(guó)家安全，他曾隱姓埋名工作，30 年不為人所知，現(xiàn)雖年過(guò) 90 仍?shī)^斗不止； 4. 他的行為向我們?cè)忈屃耸裁词菍?duì)國(guó)家和人民的熱愛(ài)。 寫作要求： 1. 文章不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名； 2. 文

49、章必須包含所提供的主要信息，必要時(shí)可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3. 詞數(shù) 80 個(gè)以上，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。 參考詞匯： 核潛艇 nuke; 國(guó)家安全 national security; 隱姓埋名 conceal one’s identity Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’

50、s nukes. We were all inspired by his heroic deeds. 【答案】Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. He was born in a rich family. In

51、order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes. To protect the national security, he used to conce

52、al/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(And now he doesn’t stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old) His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country. We w

53、ere all inspired by his heroic deeds 12.【2018年山東東營(yíng)】在你的成長(zhǎng)歷程中，一定收到過(guò)禮物。有件禮物不一定貴重，但是在你看來(lái)卻非常珍貴。 某英語(yǔ)雜志以“A Precious Present(一件珍貴的禮物)”為題舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)寫一篇短文，跟大家分享。內(nèi)容包括： 1.這件禮物是什么？ 2.你為什么覺(jué)得它珍貴？ 3.它背后有什么故事？ 要求： 1.100詞左右； 2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。 【答案】A precious present The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of

54、 quite a few gifts I’ve got. Yet, the first come to my mind is the book, the Adventures of Tom Sawyer. On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn’t like reading, I put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story in

55、terested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading. Though the book is not valuable, it’s precious. I’ll regard it as a treasure forever. 【解析】 這是一篇命題作文，以“A Precious Present”為題與大家分享一件自己所擁有的珍禮物。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)要注意作文的整體框架。首先介紹這件禮物的名字是什么，附帶著說(shuō)明它

56、的來(lái)歷，接著講述這件禮物背后的故事，最后可以總結(jié)說(shuō)明為什么這件禮物對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)非常珍貴。另外，寫作時(shí)還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。 13.【2018年廣西賀州】 假設(shè)你是Susan,在家里你的父母總是對(duì)你有很多要求,有時(shí)你是否感到厭煩?你是怎樣解決的?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 父母的要求 每天打掃房間；不能玩電腦游戲；晚上10點(diǎn)前必須睡覺(jué)…… 你的看法 雖太嚴(yán)厲，但理解他們…… 你的解決方式 與父母多交流，為父母做些家務(wù)…… 要求:1.文章必須包括表格中所給提示內(nèi)容,可以展開思路,自由地適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

57、。 2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名和其它真實(shí)信息。 3.詞數(shù)80詞右。前兩句已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。 【答案】My name is Susan. There are too many rules in my family. I have to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can't go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict

58、with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them do housework. These are my good ways to get on well with them. 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)

59、態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如there be，be allowed to，free time，be strict with，communicate with，as much as possible，share ... with，get on well with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。 【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起： 認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。 構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，

60、因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。 初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。 修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 14.【2018年黑龍江龍東地區(qū)】Writing (注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則不得分) 81. 為了綠化環(huán)境,打造花園城市，你校將組織學(xué)生去北山公園植樹。請(qǐng)

61、你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫一則通知。要求同學(xué)們明天上午8點(diǎn)在學(xué)校門口集合，乘坐校車一起前往；穿好校服；自備午餐；不要遲到。 Notice All the students, Students' Union 【答案】Notice All the students,

62、 In order to make our city more beautiful, we are going to plant trees in Beishan Park, We'll meet at the school gate at 8: 00 tomorrow morning and take the school bus there together. Please wear your uniforms and take your lunch. You must be on time. Students’ Union 【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不

63、少，如：In order to；plant trees ；at the school gate ；take the school bus；on time.等；采用祈使句，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。 15.【2018年黑龍江龍東地區(qū)】話題作文：為了促進(jìn)中小學(xué)生身心健康發(fā)展，我省自2018年3月1日起延遲中小學(xué)生到校時(shí)間，請(qǐng)你聯(lián)系生活實(shí)際，談?wù)剬?duì)這一舉措的看法。請(qǐng)以“My Opinions about the New Policy”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)文章。 提示:1.原來(lái)的學(xué)習(xí)生活 2.延遲后的學(xué)習(xí)生活 3.個(gè)人感受（看法） 提示詞：po

64、licy(政策)， the time of arriving at school 【答案】My Opinions about the New Policy As we know, there is a new policy about putting off the time of arriving at school in the morning in our province. I remember I had to get up early on school days and sometimes felt sleepy in class. If I got up late, I

65、needed to have a quick breakfast. Now I don' t need to get up so early that I can have enough sleep. I can keep energetic in class. What's more, I can also make good use of this period of time Reading books and doing exercise are good choices. In a word, the new policy is good for our life and stu

66、dy. 【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如：put off； get up ；in class.； make good use of ；be good for等；As we know ；Now ；What's more,；In a word等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。 16.【2018年黑龍江龍東地區(qū)】 圖示作文：仔細(xì)觀察下列三幅圖片,展開合理想象,然后寫一篇短文。 要求： 1.話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。 2.詞數(shù)在80~100之間。 3.字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 【答案】It was Monday yesterday, Li Bing went right home after school. While he was doing his homework, he felt some drops of rain. After a while, it rained more and more heavily. He looked at the cl