2022-2023學(xué)年高中英語 Module 3 Literature寫作園地-人物描寫 外研版選修7

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1、2022-2023學(xué)年高中英語 Module 3 Literature寫作園地-人物描寫 外研版選修7 [感悟范文] 請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩，展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂螅瑢懸黄涛摹? 標(biāo)題為：My Teacher Mrs.Mary There's a teacher Mrs.Mary. Who is lovely and forty-four. Always encouraging us to try. She leads us to a world of “why”． We all admire her more and more. 要求：1.不得照抄短詩原文； 2．結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，

2、發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開； 3．短文不能寫成詩歌形式； 4．詞數(shù)：120左右。 [范文] Of all my teachers, Mrs.Mary is the one who impresses me most. Though she is 44, she looks very young for her age. And she's one of the most popular teachers in our school. pared with other teachers, Mrs.Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching.

3、 She tries various ways to make her classes lively and interesting. In the opinion of her, we should not only know “what”， but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever she puts forward questions. With her help, we've learne

4、d how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of “why” she leads us to! She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much. [技法討論] 1．本文是人物描寫，屬于記敘文體。 人物描寫的目的是刻畫人物性格，表現(xiàn)人物的精神面貌；人物描寫應(yīng)該力求具體生動，爭取達(dá)到繪聲繪色地再現(xiàn)“人物”，這樣也能深刻地表達(dá)文章的中心。 2．按照記敘文的要求來寫。人稱相對統(tǒng)一，常用第三人稱。時態(tài)常以一般時態(tài)為主。 3．首先總體介紹人物的

5、整體概況，然后具體介紹人物的特點。寫作時要主題明確，內(nèi)容詳實，層次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。 黃金表達(dá) 1．和……比較pare...with... 2．讓課堂生動有趣make one's classes lively and interesting 3．在某人看來in the opinion of sb. 4．在……幫助下with sb.'s help 5．和其他老師相比，瑪麗老師更注重教學(xué)方法。 pared with other teachers, Mrs. Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching. 6．在她看來，我們不但應(yīng)該知

6、道是什么，還應(yīng)該知道為什么。 In the opinion of her, we should not only know “what”， but also understand “why”． 亮點分析： 1．本文是一篇人物描寫，能夠根據(jù)所給的內(nèi)容，圍繞主題，展開豐富的想象，用簡潔的語言把老師的形象描寫出來，是一篇佳作。文中使用了很多短語：pay more attention to，in one's opinion, instead of，encourage sb. to do sth.等。還運(yùn)用了一些句式結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章不單一。如：pared with other teachers, Mr

7、s.Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching. 2．文章使用一般現(xiàn)在時，條理清晰。 3．亮點句式 (1)Though she is 44, she looks very young for her age. (2)pared with other teachers, Mrs.Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching. (3) So, instead of giving us answers immediately, she encourages us to think by o

8、urselves whenever she puts forward questions. (4) She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much. [類文演練] 請按照下面所提供的主要內(nèi)容，以“My Mother”為題，寫一篇120個詞左右的短文。 (1)你母親是個農(nóng)村婦女，40多歲，沒上過學(xué)，但懂得年輕人掌握知識的重要性，她很關(guān)心你的學(xué)習(xí)情況。 (2)你母親為了讓你有更多的時間學(xué)習(xí)，總是竭盡全力來照顧你。一次，當(dāng)你聽說母親病重時，回家看她，可是卻發(fā)現(xiàn)她為你做新衣服直到深夜，你感動得熱淚盈眶。 (3)你母

9、親就是這樣一位婦女，善良、勤勞，永遠(yuǎn)值得你尊敬和愛戴。 [聯(lián)想詞匯] 1. 40多歲　　　　　　　________________ 答案：in one's forties 2. 沒上過學(xué) have got no __________ 答案：education 3. 知識 ________________ 答案：knowledge 4. 重要性 ________________ 答案：importance 5. 關(guān)心，關(guān)注 ________ oneself with 答案：concern 6．我的學(xué)習(xí)情況 my ____________ 答案：study

10、 7．竭盡全力 ________________ 答案：spare no efforts/do one's best 8．照顧某人 ________________ 答案：take care of/look after 9．善良、勤勞 ________________ 答案：kind and hard-working 10．尊敬 ______/show ________ 答案：respect；respect for [連詞成句] 1. My mother is a mid-aged woman who has been living in a village, and

11、________________. My mother is a mid-aged woman who has been living in a village, already ________________. 母親是個農(nóng)村中年婦女，40多歲。 答案：she is in her forties; in her forties 2. Although she has got no education, she knows that ________________________________. She has very little school education, ____

12、____________________________. 她沒上過學(xué)，但懂得年輕人掌握知識的重要性。 答案：it is of great importance for young people to master much knowledge; but she knows that knowledge is very important to young people 3. My mother ________________ me ________________ I can spend more time on study. ________________ he

13、lp me spend more time on study, my mother ________________ me. 母親為了讓我有更多的時間學(xué)習(xí)，總是竭盡全力來照顧我。 答案：cares well about; so that; In order to; takes good care of 4. One day, ________， I hurried to go home to see her. ________________ , and I rushed home to see her. 一次，當(dāng)我聽說母親病重時，匆忙回家看她。 答案：when I hea

14、rd she was seriously ill; Once I heard she was badly ill 5．When I got home at night, I found my mother ________________， making new clothes for me late in the night. When I got home at night, I found that my mother ______________， making new clothes for me deep into the night. 當(dāng)我晚上到家時，發(fā)現(xiàn)母親仍坐在床上，為

15、我做新衣服直到深夜。 答案：sitting in bed; was sitting in bed 6．I was ________________ tears came to my eyes. It was ________________ tears scalded my eyes. 我感動得熱淚盈眶。 答案：so deeply moved that; such a moving scene that 7．My mother is ____________________________. ________________， a kind and hard-worki

16、ng woman. 我母親就是這樣一位婦女，善良、勤勞。 答案：such a kind and hard-working woman; Such is my mother [連句成章] __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________________________________________

17、___ One Possible Version： My Mother My mother is a mid-aged woman who has been living in a village, already in her forties. She has very little school education, but she knows that knowledge is very important to young people. She often teaches me how to get along with my study and encoura

18、ges me to study hard. My mother cares well about me. She does not let me do housework, so that I can spend more time on study. Once I heard she was badly ill, and I rushed home to see her. When I got home at night, I found my mother sitting in bed, making new clothes for me deep into the night. I was so deeply moved that tears came to my eyes. Such is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman. I will respect and love her forever.